And the Tuesday update finally appears. The day’s what, only three-fourths finished? I’m thinking that still counts for Tuesday–except maybe in countries where it’s already Wednesday.
“How do you owe somebody a thousand dollars?” I didn’t need to ask about the car. Everybody in school had heard about Vaughn crashing Sean’s car.
I’d heard three different versions of that story and I’m mostly unaware of the school rumor mill.
“Last year was a wild year,” Vaughn said.
On the sidewalk in front of us, Sean got into the passenger seat of a red jeep. He gave Vaughn the finger as the jeep drove off.
“For you,” I said.
“Yeah,” he said, “for me. My parents gave me a pretty big allowance and weren’t paying much attention to what I did with it. So I spent a lot of it on parties and sometimes when I was out of cash, I borrowed.”
“You borrowed a thousand dollars?”
“Not all at once. Just when Sean added it all up, you know? And he’s not the only guy I owe money to. I could have paid it back, but then my parents cut off my allowance and sent me to rehab.”
I know enough about Dad’s style to know that he recommends parents create clear and immediate consequences.
“Who else do you owe?”
“Look, I didn’t come here to tell you everything I ever did wrong. I came here to apologize. I’m sorry I broke in. I’m sorry you had to take me home. That’s it.”
He stood up and started walking back up the stairs and into the school. I hurried to keep up with him, passing under Central High’s arched doorway. I didn’t want to risk a fight (what with him being a walking electrical outlet and me being out of costume), but some things still bothered me.
We walked past the glassed in trophy display case on one side and the windows into the computer lab on the other.
“Vaughn,” I said, still a couple steps behind him in the hall, “Why now? If you wanted power, you had all summer. What were you waiting for?”
So yeah, brilliant move. Instead of leaving a guy who may the ability to electrocute me alone, I go and point out to him that logically he should have broken into Grandpa’s house earlier.
He stopped and turned to face me. It may have just been my imagination, but I thought I saw something arc up his forearm from his right hand.
“They told me I had a week to get them more of Grandpa’s stuff or else, you know, they’d—they never said, but it sounded like they were going to go after my parents next.”
“Wait a second, you were breaking in to steal something?”
“I wasn’t stealing anything. I was breaking in to get the power to protect myself.”
“Why didn’t you call the police?”
“It’s not that simple,” he said and opened the door that led to the school locker rooms. Central has special locker rooms for people on a sports team. Both the athletes’ lockers and the regular lockers are part of a 70’s era addition and include a lot of cinderblock painted blue and yellow, but the athletes’ locker rooms have bigger lockers.
The athletes’ locker room smells of BenGay and sweat soaked athletic uniforms. It was empty—except for Coach Michaelson.
Coach Michaelson is also known as Mr. Michaelson, one of the math teachers. I’ve always liked him, but being cross country coach has always struck me as a bit of a blow off job. So far as I can tell, ninety percent of it is saying, “Today we’re going to run six miles. Go out and have a great time.”
Granted, it’s not always six miles, but it’s basically the same line.
“You’re late,” he said, “but it’s OK. Everyone else is already gone, but you guys can buddy up and do a four mile run. Have fun.”
He wrote something on his clipboard and left.
Vaughn and I put on our sweats and walked out of the locker room into the gym. From there we stepped outside, exiting through big metal doors to the track behind the school.
We didn’t talk while running warm up laps. Then we left the school grounds to do the run. Central High is in the middle of the city so we do a lot of our training on the road.
It was a decent day for running. The skies were blue. The temperature wasn’t too hot or too cold. Goldilocks would have been pleased.
A couple blocks into the run I asked Vaughn, “Who are ‘they?’ I mean seriously, you make it sound like the Men in Black or the Mafia.”
We were leaving downtown, passing into old neighborhoods of Victorian houses, wooden homes with towers and turrets.
“A couple guys who were hanging out at the parties I went to. After my parents cut off my allowance, they gave me a few loans.”
“And all they wanted was your grandfather’s stuff? That’s crazy.”
Vaughn stopped running. When he replied, he was almost shouting at me. “You don’t know what it was like. Sean and everyone else wanted their money back and I was panicking and they had money. And they gave it to me no strings attached.”
I began to open my mouth and point out that handing over his grandfather’s equipment was more like a rope than a string and it probably had a noose on the end to boot.
He interrupted me before I even got a word out, saving the metaphor from abuse.
“I know it was stupid. Don’t tell me.”
“What did you give them?”
“Some gadget from his costume and book full of formulas. After that they left me alone–or at least they did until you guys turned cape.”

January 30th, 2008 at 10:06 pm
First!
Some really interesting twists this time around. I wish you had the time to do the whole conversation at once, but I understand (I started writing for practice and I’m beginning to see how many hours can go into writing a single paragraph.)
Keep up the good work.
January 30th, 2008 at 10:37 pm
Thanks. Sadly, there’s still more of the conversation to go. Not much though.
For me, the hard part is always background–not creating background (I create large chunks of background reflexively), but figuring out the best time to mention the background and not deluge the reader with massive chunks of “by the way, in order to understand anything, you’ll need to read these 4000 words of explanation.”
I try imply the background and explain only when I can’t see any easy way to imply. That’s a good chunk of why we’re all getting a week’s worth of conversation with Vaughn (the other part being Nick’s and Vaughn’s personalities).
I’m personally looking forward to the next part of this story (which, to be honest, I expected to get to earlier than this).
January 31st, 2008 at 4:52 pm
Vaughn’s been supplying the bad guys? With his evil grandfather’s formulas? Great! (sarcasm)
I can’t wait to see how they have to get him out of this…
~Cindy
September 22nd, 2008 at 12:25 am
As you can see, I’m quite taken with this Vaughn character, and in this chapter, he becomes an even more mysterious wild card.
He clearly has personal demons, but is giving in to them or fighting them.
Also, continuing the Anakin/Luke metaphor, will Nick be his Obi-Wan and eventually become his enemy, or will he be his Han Solo and must trusted pal??
Loving it, Jim, loving it.