Lee made us think through the circumstances in which we were willing to kill people.
Partially, I’m sure, it was because the circumstances in which you’re willing to kill dictate the sort of moves you need to practice. Partially, it had to be because when the moment came, you needed to recognize it and not hesitate.
We were close to mine.
I’d always believed that I’d be willing to kill, if it were choice between killing, or letting someone I cared about die.
The four people in powered armor stepped out of the wall and started running after us, firing their automatics and knocking Jennys over. Her costume obviously had some protection against bullets, but not enough to shrug off the hit.
Next to me, Jenny grunted as her doubles fell.
I needed to do something, but I didn’t want to kill anybody.
Running two across, the men in powered armor had covered the distance between us and the hole in instants. I had to make a decision immediately.
I pointed the guitar at the leg of the first person and fired. I was dead on. The shot burned cleanly through the armor and the leg. The man fell down.
I aimed the guitar at the man next to him, centered his leg in the helmet’s sight and fired. He went down too. The laser burned through the armor like it didn’t even exist.
I took out the other two just as easily, each time in the leg. The last one ended up not more than ten feet from me. They’d managed to take out all the Jennys behind me with a combination of automatic fire and paralysis. The last one had taken a twenty foot long leap in the air in a last ditch effort to take me down, getting him close enough for me to see the beam enter and exit his leg.
He hit the ground, and, I could hear him screaming through his helmet.
The laser blast had cauterized the wound, making him much less likely bleed to death, but it couldn’t have felt good.
As disturbed as I felt by his obvious pain, part of me felt awed by my sudden ability to shoot that well while twisting around to fire backwards.
Then, remembering what Alex’ dad’s powers were, I wasn’t awed so much as full of understanding. Even when he wasn’t actively healing, the bodies of people near him adjusted to reach their maximum potential plus some more. I’d wondered how long it took to be affected. Apparently, two days was long enough.
That completely explained how Jenny could be as accurate as she was.
I wondered just how far I could take it myself, and, how long it would be before it faded away.
Not that I really had much time to think. The standard Syndicate L troops had made it down the stairwell.
I turned back toward the front to watch. The Jennys ahead of me started firing first, taking out about half the group with her stunners before Syndicate L’s people regrouped and started firing back. Somewhere in the middle of all that Alex began firing too, one pistol in each hand, using guns that fired mini-concussion grenades. The blasts knocked people over and into walls.
I don’t know how many people he and the Jennys took out.
A lot of bodies lay on the floor — at least thirty — and none of them Jennys because her bodies just disappeared.
Syndicate L’s people kept coming down the stairway.
To judge from the expression on their faces, they didn’t look happy about it, and why would they be? On the floor lay the bodies of their friends and ahead of them, a grinning teenager in a white, long coat whose pistols seemed to act as extensions of his hands.
Then he stopped firing and holstered the guns.
“He’s out of ammo,” Jenny said.
Six more of her appeared, and ran to join him.
I ran after them, passing Brooke and Carlos, and catching up to the Jennys. Just as I began to think about which of the guitar’s modes to use, Alex engaged the first one to step out from the stairwell.
He punched the guy in the face, knocking him unconscious and into the next person on the stairway. While the second guy tried to disentangle himself, Alex punched him, knocking him backwards.
Alex didn’t have a particularly complex hand to hand style, but he executed it perfectly.
I pulled a grenade off my utility belt and threw it into the stairwell, aiming high so that the flash would be most likely to blind our enemies and shouting, “Don’t look!”
I watched anyway. The helmet blocked it.
Even through the helmet, the flash blinded me for a moment, turning the room completely white. The people with no protection against the blast would be seeing spots for the next minute or so.
Alex laughed, pulled the men he’d knocked down out of the stairwell, and started pounding the men behind them.
It seemed inevitable that we would win. Alex fought better than any normal human could and even if he hadn’t been, the flash grenade had left his enemies partially blinded.
I started to follow him up the stairs, and then felt an unpleasant sensation I remembered from Christmas. My limbs stopped responding and I fell forwards into the stairwell.
A paralysis ray.
I’d left the guys in powered armor lying on the floor, but still conscious. Then I’d gotten too distracted thinking about the way I’d taken them down to ask what I should be doing to them next.
We were going to lose, and it was my fault.
Damm what a tension filler
Soooo… they had a hole burned in the leg but they somehow have the presence of mind to use their paralyse gun? That stretch my sod.
These paralysis rays seem awfully handy. The heroes should start shopping wherever it is the black hats buy them from.
They get them from the same source. It’ll show up one of these days…
Gah!!! He needs to line his armor with lead! Or whatever will absorb the paralysis ray.
Well Nick had did his best to not kill them but forgot to take them out of the fight.
I am sure getting a hole burnt thru your leg doesn’t feel good.
Here is hoping that the cops and the other heros show up pretty soon.
Sometimes having a brain that runs a mile a minute isn’t the best thing…
I’d always believed that if people I cared about risked dying if I didn’t kill, I’d do it.
the end of this sentence is a little confusing, he thinks about killing but if he didn’t kill he would do “it” (from the context i get that “it” means dying but from the textstructure it would mean kill)
“He punched the guy in the face, knocking him unconscious …”
I know i’m late to the party but all those people getting punched out is starting to really bother me.
K.O.ing humans requires either a lot of small brain traumas resulting in at least a minor concussion or a single large brain trauma resulting in at least a major concussion. Actually knocking somebody unconscious for any length of time has a high to very high chance of skull fractures and/or permanent brain damage and doing so by punching to the face will result in a broken nose (with a lot of blood spraying from it) and a medium to high chance of driving the nasal bone back into the brain and therefor killing.
Also who teaches fighting to those guys (yeah, i know it’s Lee for Nick and the gang)? Aiming for the face with an unprotected fist is a surefire way of getting your knuckles torn open by our opponents teeth or breaking your knuckles on your opponents forehead. If you want/have to go for the head use hooks, uppercuts or jabs but not punches.
I realize that it’s way too late to do anything about all those guys getting punched unconscious without any apparent damage ’till now (and i fear still ahead of me in the chapters i haven’t read yet…) but maybe the author can keep this in mind for the chapters (or other works) he hasn’t written yet.
I know. Seriously.
I studied Tae Kwon Do for several years. I try to be realistic, but sometimes I follow convention for stories like this–which does mean that sometimes people get up after being knocked unconscious with less side effects than you might expect.
I’m fairly sure that there’s less of that as the story goes on.
On another note, feel free to assume all costumes include gloves unless specifically stated otherwise–I do.
Well, it’s one of the conventions that put me off from superhero stories/comics. Another major one is the need of the hero/protagonist to let his enemies live to haunt him again tomorrow. And i have a feeling that i will be seeing some of that too…
Anyways, it’s your story and i can respect your decision to knowingly write it that way.
Your writing and story (so far) is good enough that isn’t too much of a turn-off for now. Also you’re entertaining me for free, so i do have even less ground to complain…
Imagining that the costumes come with lead powder lined gloves as standard doesn’t help with the lack of side effects of being knocked unconscious though.
With regards to villain reuse… Well, that’s a matter of opinion. I don’t have the same pressure to reuse enemies as comic book companies. There are three enemies that have reappeared, however (in seven years of writing).
In one case, the person was dead (for real, forever) after the second use. The second group is obviously coming back (but hasn’t yet) because they’re nearly impossible to kill, and the third case is also obviously coming back, but again may not survive it. That remains to be seen though.
That said, the characters are starting out as “average” high school students (who happen to be descended from superheroes). As such, killing is outside of the normal way they handle problems, so it’s not as if they’re in a big hurry to do it.
That’s not to say that they don’t though.
“That said, the characters are starting out as “average” high school students (who happen to be descended from superheroes). As such, killing is outside of the normal way they handle problems, so it’s not as if they’re in a big hurry to do it.”
Yeah, i got that. And i didn’t want to imply that the characters should be starting killing right from the start, just that they (or the police/feds) should dispose their beaten opponents somewhere more secure the a cardboard prison like Arkham Asylum or wherever Spidy dumps is enemys.
And from your, thankfully spoiler free, description of the recurring opponents in the later chapters, that seems to be the case.
Also thanks for your speedy replies.